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you have talent good sir!
My only criticism is that I get the feeling that he's supposed to be sitting on a bench or table or something of the sort, but whatever he's sitting on doesn't feel much like either; his thighs don't seem to be resting on the aforementioned sitting place, but rather sort of hovering over them. This gives the illusion that (what I'm assuming is supposed to be the level top surface of) the table isn't flat, but rather is slanted towards his feet and he's not really touching it at all. I'd suggest trying to work with the shading of his cape to make that surface feel more level, if it's something you want to mess with. Other than that though, very nice work!